Feedback On Music Video

As mentioned on my Second Draft post, the song was cut short due to the stress of trying to develop the narrative. Today I had booked lunchtime appointment with Tim to ask him for advice. I mentioned I couldn't film anything including Jess since she is not here. However he did give me some ideas such going back to locations to get pan shots to place at the beginning of the video. There is also just a few shots during the video that I need to change to make it look better and fit with the music. By adding in this footage in at the beginning will mean the overall length of the video will be extend by at least 20 seconds and will allow more effective editing such as fades-since at the beginning, it will not disturb the flow of the video. Over the next week I am aiming to get all the filming done and the video edited as a third and possible final product.