These are two drafts I have produced as a second draft. They are pretty much the same except I have altered the font of 'The new album' to see what difference it would make. Compared to my first draft, it looks more varied because of the different for I have used for her name. It is still, however, difficult to read the black text and I feel it therefore doesn't flow very well when trying to look at the advert as a whole. I am therefore going to ask one of my media teachers for some advice on how to improve it to make look more conventional and easier to read.
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