As mentioned in the last post, this is just a quick draft after I added the opening shots. I am going to ask Tim and others for feedback on how effective these shots are and if there is anything else I should make changes to. Since my second draft, the only thing I have changed is the two shots of Jess' feet ,walking on the river bank, to a shot of her playing in the Old Town. the problem I may have now is trying to incorporate more shots within the old town as this is the only shot there. Another minor problem is the last pan shot of the River Bank-it is faster than the others. I thought I could use this from previous filming that I did but I may have to re-film it.
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